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Tuesday, 1 November 2016

the adventure of me ben jack and sarah

A cold and quiet night in camp raglan it has only been one day since we first got here and it’s just only me, ben, jack and sarah but now it’s just me, ben and jack nobody knows where sarah went … wait a minute she probably went to the secret spot of the camp … 30 min’s later woooo hooo that was a blast and a waste of my time, i knew she wouldn’t be there cried Ben, i’m scared what if there were werewolves and they ate her all up said jack, really jack stop being such a drama queen I shouted hey look i found one of sarahs lollies raper’s wait a minute we aren’t aloud to bring lollies, yes we are Ben said and are you sure that you found just one because there is a whole lot of them and they leave a trail to the girls bathroom oh so she was there the whole time, Who’s the drama queen now hah said jack ‘me drama queen haha good luck with that’ i whispered , There you are sarah, jack thought that werewolves came and gobbled you all up ‘’ so ‘’ You thought that she just disappeared into thin air and ben thought that you were in our hide out … What hideout cried sarah ah what  nothing there was no hideout any where shouted jack tell me where it is NOW yelled sarah i told you there is no hideout.

because there is a whole lot of them and they leave a trail to the girls bathroom oh so she was there the whole time, Who’s the drama queen now hah said jack ‘me drama queen haha good luck with that’ i whispered , There you are sarah, jack thought that werewolves came and gobbled you all up ‘’ so ‘’ You thought that she just disappeared into thin air and ben thought that you were in our hide out … What hideout cried sarah ah what  nothing there was no hideout any where shouted jack tell me where it is NOW yelled sarah i told you there is no hideout.

because there is a whole lot of them and they leave a trail to the girls bathroom oh so she was there the whole time, Who’s the drama queen now hah said jack ‘me drama queen haha good luck with that’ i whispered , There you are Sarah, jack thought that werewolves came and gobbled you all up ‘’ so ‘’ You thought that she just disappeared into thin air and Ben thought that you were in our hide out … What hideout cried Sarah ah what  nothing there was no hideout any where shouted jack tell me where it is NOW yelled Sarah i told you there is no hideout.

4 comments:

  1. I had to say this is a really big letters maybe next time you can make the letters smaller because it take a lot of space.

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  2. i had to say you putted to much words in the story and i don,t like green letter and the words are to big

    from alex lang

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  3. I love your story it made me smile. if you put a capidil I will fall of my cheir ow I just did

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  4. I love your story it made me smile. if you put a capidil I will fall of my cheir ow I just did

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